Feedback Analysis

I received a lot of very useful feedback for my pitch which will help me to develop my idea and produce a better music video.


Suggestions
Some of the suggestions that I got were to incorporate some comedic elements into the video, this will enhance the feel of a punk video whilst also giving another element to keep the audiences interest throughout the video. Another suggestion was that I could  try and add some variety to the locations of my video and also try to vary the look of each of the band performing. Also I found that although people thought I had a good idea there were some elements which I didn't fully explain  and so people found it hard to grasp the full concept, in future presentations I will try to give more information on my idea and elaborate on some of the more confusing elements. If I were to do my presentation again I would try to explain my idea in more detail by describing the different types of shot that I would use and some of the different techniques that I would use. 


Positives
The soft sound of the song means that it will appeal to a wider audience which may include people who don't necessarily fit into the stereotype of a rock listener. Also the idea of shooting the video as a band competition is quite unique as I haven't found a video that uses the same ideas as mine but I have taken inspiration from videos like "American Idiot" which use a lot of as live performance. This type of video will not have to change the environment a lot to keep the audiences interest as the variety of bands would do this in place of location changes.